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    Speaking Task 7 — Expressing Opinions

    CELPIP Speaking Task 7 sample answers — bands 10, 11, 12

    30s prep · 90s speak

    The prompt

    Do you think companies should monitor employees’ internet use during work hours, or trust workers to manage their time responsibly? Give your opinion and explain your reason

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    10

    Band 10

    A clear opinion with two developed reasons, a fair acknowledgement of the other side, and a firm conclusion. Language is accurate and the argument is easy to follow, with mostly everyday vocabulary.

    Transcript

    In my opinion, companies should trust their employees rather than monitor their internet use. The first reason is that monitoring does not really measure work. If someone finishes a project on time and does it well, it does not matter if they looked at the news for ten minutes. What matters is the result, not the browser history. Many people also work better when they take short breaks. My second reason is about trust. When employees know that somebody is watching every website, the atmosphere in the office changes. People start to feel like suspects instead of professionals, and in my experience the good employees are the ones who leave first when that happens. Of course, I understand the company's side. There are security risks, and some websites can bring viruses or leak information. So I would accept blocking dangerous sites, and I think that is reasonable. But watching what every person clicks on, all day, is different. That is not security, that is control. I believe managers should judge people by their work, and only look deeper if there is a real problem.

    Why this is a band 10

    Task Fulfillmentcompanies should trust their employees rather than monitor their internet use

    States a clear position in the first sentence, which Task 7 requires before any reasons.

    Content/CoherenceWhat matters is the result, not the browser history.

    Compresses the first argument into a single memorable contrast.

    VocabularyPeople start to feel like suspects instead of professionals

    Precise word pairing that captures the effect on workplace atmosphere.

    Content/CoherenceSo I would accept blocking dangerous sites, and I think that is reasonable.

    Concedes a limited version of the opposing view, which strengthens rather than weakens the opinion.

    ListenabilityThat is not security, that is control.

    A short, balanced sentence that lands clearly aloud and marks the turn into the conclusion.

    11

    Band 11

    A confident, well-structured opinion with a personal illustration, an insightful second argument, and a clearly bounded concession. Idiomatic and natural throughout.

    Transcript

    I come down firmly on the side of trusting employees, though with one exception I will come to. My main reason is that monitoring measures the wrong thing. It tells you how long a screen was open, not whether the work was any good. I have worked with people who never opened a browser and produced very little, and with people who read the news for twenty minutes and then delivered something excellent. If a manager cannot tell the difference without software, the problem is the manager, not the browsing. The second reason is what monitoring does to a workplace. The moment people know every click is logged, they stop experimenting, they stop asking questions in writing, and the good ones quietly start looking elsewhere. You end up keeping exactly the employees who do not mind being watched, which is not the group you want to keep. The exception is security. Blocking known malicious sites, protecting client data, logging access to sensitive systems — that is not surveillance, that is basic hygiene, and no reasonable employee objects. But tracking what individuals read all day is a different thing, and it usually says more about the company than the staff.

    Why this is a band 11

    Content/Coherencemonitoring measures the wrong thing

    Names the core objection in four words and then illustrates it, which is efficient under time pressure.

    VocabularyIf a manager cannot tell the difference without software, the problem is the manager

    A sharp conditional that turns the argument around on the person proposing the monitoring.

    Content/Coherencethey stop asking questions in writing

    A specific, non-obvious consequence, which shows the speaker has thought past the general claim.

    Content/CoherenceYou end up keeping exactly the employees who do not mind being watched

    Follows the argument one step further to a genuinely uncomfortable conclusion.

    Vocabularythat is not surveillance, that is basic hygiene

    Draws the line precisely, so the concession does not undermine the main position.

    Task Fulfillmentit usually says more about the company than the staff

    Closes by restating the opinion in a fresh form rather than repeating the opening sentence.

    12

    Band 12

    A precise, sophisticated argument that reframes the question, traces a second-order cost most speakers miss, and draws an exact line at the concession. Sustained fluency and idiomatic control across a full ninety seconds.

    Transcript

    Trust, with a narrow and well-defined exception — and I think the exception is where this debate actually lives. The case against monitoring is not really about privacy, it is about measurement. Logging software tells you a screen was open. It cannot tell you whether the person was solving the problem or avoiding it, and any manager who needs a dashboard to work that out has already lost the thread. Half an hour of apparent idleness is sometimes the most productive part of a difficult day. The second cost is slower and harder to see. Once people know every click is recorded, behaviour narrows. They stop asking naive questions, stop poking at unfamiliar tools, stop leaving a trail that could be misread. You do not get a more diligent workforce, you get a more cautious one, and caution is expensive in ways that never appear in a report. Where I do agree: protect client data, block known threats, log access to systems that hold other people's information. Nobody sensible calls that surveillance. The distinction I would hold to is between protecting the company and inspecting the person. The first is an obligation. The second is a management failure with a software licence attached.

    Why this is a band 12

    Content/CoherenceI think the exception is where this debate actually lives

    Signals from the outset that the interesting part is the boundary, not the headline position.

    Content/Coherenceit is about measurement

    Reframes the question away from the expected privacy argument, which immediately raises the level.

    Vocabularyany manager who needs a dashboard to work that out has already lost the thread

    Idiomatic, pointed, and delivered without strain.

    Content/CoherenceYou do not get a more diligent workforce, you get a more cautious one

    Identifies a second-order effect and states it as a balanced contrast.

    Vocabularycaution is expensive in ways that never appear in a report

    Compresses a whole line of reasoning into a single clause.

    Task Fulfillmentbetween protecting the company and inspecting the person

    Gives the listener the exact principle that decides the question, which is the strongest possible close.

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